{"id":1198,"date":"2016-10-26T14:09:13","date_gmt":"2016-10-26T18:09:13","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/ctlsites.uga.edu\/magwriting\/?p=1198"},"modified":"2016-10-26T14:09:13","modified_gmt":"2016-10-26T18:09:13","slug":"outline-5","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/ctlsites.uga.edu\/magwriting\/outline-5\/","title":{"rendered":"Outline"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>Part One: Indiana, The End<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li>Lede, describes Don Collins<\/li>\n<li>Insight into mind of Collins, his knowledge and childhood with Father as a mortician<\/li>\n<li>Detail and setting mood<\/li>\n<li>showing process of grave digging and Collins thought process<\/li>\n<li>Next day, naming and describing funeral attending military members<\/li>\n<li>Journey of funeral motorcade to graveyard<\/li>\n<li>Describing those awaiting as hearse drives into cemetery<\/li>\n<li>Describing casket<\/li>\n<li>Describing service and sounds<\/li>\n<li>Soldiers fire in perfect unison<\/li>\n<li>Leatherbee the bugler<\/li>\n<li>Describing training of army bugler<\/li>\n<li>Quote from Leatherbee about playing with eyes open vs eyes closed<\/li>\n<li>Lowering of casket, quote from sergeant on family<\/li>\n<li>Huber quote about soldier&#8217;s kids<\/li>\n<li>soldiers fold flag, Huber quote<\/li>\n<li>Soldier places shells in folded flag<\/li>\n<li>Dawson passes flag to older woman<\/li>\n<li>General officer Pinckney<\/li>\n<li>Pinckney talking about comforting wife<\/li>\n<li>Pinckney approaches Missie with flag<\/li>\n<li>Pinckney quote on empathy<\/li>\n<li>Details about flag<\/li>\n<li>Quote what Pinckney says to widow<\/li>\n<li>end of service, lowering of casket<\/li>\n<li>burying the caske<\/li>\n<li>Gail Bonds recalls her baby boy and dries her eyes<\/li>\n<li>Bonds and details of cigarettes<\/li>\n<li>Bonds&#8217;s experiences with deaths of those close to her<\/li>\n<li>Bonds&#8217;s attending family members<\/li>\n<li>Describing those in the church<\/li>\n<li>What attendees learned about Joe from eulogies<\/li>\n<li>Procession of body<\/li>\n<li>Barclay brothers and experience with processions<\/li>\n<li>Barclay quote<\/li>\n<li>Purpose of Patriot Guard<\/li>\n<li>Sergeant Dunaway description and quote<\/li>\n<li>Gail and Bill driving, Bill quote<\/li>\n<li>Vicki quote<\/li>\n<li>Joey&#8217;s life as mechanic<\/li>\n<li>Joey&#8217;s best friend Ryan, Ryan quote<\/li>\n<li>Ryan quote about high school<\/li>\n<li>Joey and Ryan friendship details<\/li>\n<li>Ryan quote about paintings<\/li>\n<li>Ryan designs Joey&#8217;s tombstone<\/li>\n<li>Procession down the highway with families saluting<\/li>\n<li>Emotions of the family<\/li>\n<li>Describing difficulties for Joey after high school<\/li>\n<li>Desrcibing Joey living with sister<\/li>\n<li>Ryan visiting Joey<\/li>\n<li>Joey wanting to come home<\/li>\n<li>Joey came home, piecing together his life<\/li>\n<li>Joey and Missie have children<\/li>\n<li>Joey joins army<\/li>\n<li>Desrcibing connection to brother, also in army<\/li>\n<li>Joey providing for his family<\/li>\n<li>Mom&#8217;s last time seeing Joey<\/li>\n<li>Joey being proud of self and steps<\/li>\n<li>Details back to funeral procession<\/li>\n<li>Opening of the casket at the funeral home<\/li>\n<li>Gail quote<\/li>\n<li>Mason gave Joey his ring<\/li>\n<li>Jim Staggers, army chaplain<\/li>\n<li>Staggers from Indianapolis with the funeral detail, honorable transfer<\/li>\n<li>Stagger reads the bible for comfort<\/li>\n<li>Back to present day<\/li>\n<li>Details of the ritual<\/li>\n<li>Describing lifting of caskets\/ guardsmen<\/li>\n<li>Describing faces<\/li>\n<li>Details of children<\/li>\n<li>Staggers thinking of his own wife and children<\/li>\n<li>Details of family to approaching the casket<\/li>\n<li>Describing family experiencing the casket.<\/li>\n<li>Staggers holds back tears<\/li>\n<li>Casket carried back to the hearse<\/li>\n<li>Emotional reflection on the ceremony<\/li>\n<li>Two of army men in the van would be sent to Iraq<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p>Part Two: Dover Air Force Base<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li>Steve Greene answers call from Pentagon<\/li>\n<li>Greene, describing work with planes<\/li>\n<li>Process of bodies coming back to States, Holley case<\/li>\n<li>More details and results of Holley incident<\/li>\n<li>Greene quote<\/li>\n<li>Pentagon asks for same carrier service for all soldiers bodies<\/li>\n<li>Kalitta&#8217;s ranks, hauling bodies<\/li>\n<li>Jones, pilot, quote<\/li>\n<li>Description of locations they fly to<\/li>\n<li>Personnel in plane<\/li>\n<li>Linton quote about turn out<\/li>\n<li>Jones quote in agreement<\/li>\n<li>Describing \u00a0funeral where neither parent showed up, Quote<\/li>\n<li>Crowds have gotten bigger<\/li>\n<li>Sergeant Betty checks paperwork<\/li>\n<li>Describing Joey\u2019s family waiting<\/li>\n<li>Waiting was the hardest part<\/li>\n<li>Gail Quote about waiting<\/li>\n<li>Pilots emotional response to delivering body<\/li>\n<li>Describing Greene and pilots<\/li>\n<li>Major Larson worked in the port<\/li>\n<li>Descriptions of how staff at port are<\/li>\n<li>Karen Giles\u00a0quote<\/li>\n<li>Karen Giles context<\/li>\n<li>Describing the building<\/li>\n<li>Inscription from port about soldiers lost<\/li>\n<li>Joey&#8217;s body and treatment<\/li>\n<li>Describing process of cleaning the body<\/li>\n<li>No personal effects on body<\/li>\n<li>Building has both a counseling and meditation section<\/li>\n<li>David Sparks quote<\/li>\n<li>Arrival of Sergeant Montgomery\/Joey<\/li>\n<li>Autopsy of body, medical examiners<\/li>\n<li>Description of the autopsy, Joey missing some body parts<\/li>\n<li>Wounds were documented, eyes closed<\/li>\n<li>Describing the preparation of the body<\/li>\n<li>&#8220;Viewability&#8221;<\/li>\n<li>Put Joey&#8217;s bodie back together as they best could<\/li>\n<li>Anecdote of mortician cleaning one dead man&#8217;s hair, emotional context<\/li>\n<li>Spark&#8217;s quote<\/li>\n<li>Body dressed and placed in casket<\/li>\n<li>Anecdote, careful preparation of a body<\/li>\n<li>Placing of the flag is the last step<\/li>\n<li>Major General Formica<\/li>\n<li>Army Chief of Staff made mandatory that a general officer must attend every funeral and greet every plane landing with dead soldiers<\/li>\n<li>Formica greets Joey&#8217;s plane<\/li>\n<li>Group of officers waiting for the plane to land<\/li>\n<li>Sparks quote about religion<\/li>\n<li>K-loader lands on platform, engines shut off<\/li>\n<li>Honor guard marches out<\/li>\n<li>Sparks quote, emotional response doesn\u2019t get easier<\/li>\n<li>Honor guard moves one case at a time<\/li>\n<li>Sparks speech and prayer<\/li>\n<li>Cases are carried off the plane<\/li>\n<li>Sparks quote about importance of this work<\/li>\n<li>Formica quote<\/li>\n<li>Cases taken to the Port mortuary<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p>Part Three: Forward Operating Base Falcon<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li>Sergeant Slaght, Joey\u2019s friend<\/li>\n<li>Slaght reflects on the KIA<\/li>\n<li>How Slaght realized it was Monty, radio code<\/li>\n<li>Slaght and guilt of friend&#8217;s death<\/li>\n<li>Arriving at makeshift morgue at the Baghdad International Airport<\/li>\n<li>Loaded Monty onto the truck<\/li>\n<li>Identifying Monty&#8217;s body<\/li>\n<li>Slaght has been awake for forty hours<\/li>\n<li>Brother Micah one of first to learn of Joey&#8217;s death<\/li>\n<li>Micah calls Aunt, conversation<\/li>\n<li>Mom&#8217;s send kids out to play, await news<\/li>\n<li>Gail and Vicki quotes, emotional reaction to son&#8217;s death<\/li>\n<li>Missie and Ryan conversation<\/li>\n<li>Britany quote<\/li>\n<li>Description of reactions and gifts to death<\/li>\n<li>Description of dangerous mission that killed Monty<\/li>\n<li>Squad in truck<\/li>\n<li>Monty had talked to wife and kids earlier<\/li>\n<li>Monty and wife conversation, lettting her know he was okay<\/li>\n<li>Driving in Iraq<\/li>\n<li>Troop spread thin<\/li>\n<li>Humvees pull into base<\/li>\n<li>Monty was teased for his age<\/li>\n<li>Captain Goodwin check the night&#8217;s mission<\/li>\n<li>Monty&#8217;s Copanhagen<\/li>\n<li>Farmer potentially hiding weapons<\/li>\n<li>Quote, Monty believed in God<\/li>\n<li>Troop begins mission, tease Monty<\/li>\n<li>Description of walk, wearing night vision glasses<\/li>\n<li>Bunkers are everywhere<\/li>\n<li>Monty told to take his time<\/li>\n<li>Explosion<\/li>\n<li>Thought Ross was injured<\/li>\n<li>Troop can&#8217;t find Monty<\/li>\n<li>Found his rifle but not him<\/li>\n<li>Gilliland finds body, missing from waist down<\/li>\n<li>&#8220;knew he was dead&#8221;<\/li>\n<li>Radioed in as KIA<\/li>\n<li>Took turns carrying him on the litter<\/li>\n<li>Couldn\u2019t find all of him\/his ring<\/li>\n<li>Ross quote, didn&#8217;t get single scratch<\/li>\n<li>Platoon in shock<\/li>\n<li>Carried him for an hour<\/li>\n<li>Medic collected all of his things on his person<\/li>\n<li>Bostick quote, thinking about Joey\u2019s family<\/li>\n<li>Bostick doesnt\u2019t speak to Micah for two months<\/li>\n<li>Body brought to the base&#8217;s morgue<\/li>\n<li>Chaplain leads a prayer<\/li>\n<li>Not much sleep gotten that night<\/li>\n<li>Last time the platoon saw Joey was the next morning<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Part One: Indiana, The End Lede, describes Don Collins Insight into mind of Collins, his knowledge and childhood with Father as a mortician Detail and setting mood showing process of grave digging and Collins thought process Next day, naming and describing funeral attending military members Journey of funeral motorcade to graveyard Describing those awaiting as &hellip; <a href=\"https:\/\/ctlsites.uga.edu\/magwriting\/outline-5\/\" class=\"more-link\">Continue reading <span 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