UVa / Rolling Stone

I think there were a variety of red flags that should have stopped or at least slowed the publication of this story. For me, the refusal to give Drew’s last name would have been the last straw for using Jackie’s account. As a journalist, I understand that it may not be appropriate to use his full name in a story and, as a woman, I understand that Jackie was probably terrified of him. But it was the writer’s most basic duty to at least contact the attacker to give him the opportunity to share his account of that night. At minimum, the journalist needed to confirm that such a person exists. A simple Facebook search or a request to the university for access to the student directory could have saved Erdely’s credibility and shed light on the holes in Jackie’s story. This whole situation was difficult for me, because there are many points in the story that should be talked about and are a cause for concern about UVA and rape culture. But due to Erdely’s negligence in reporting and clear bias towards Jackie and other victims, readers can’t be sure if any of the article is trustworthy.

The Things That Carried Him

Pt 1 The end

  • Don Collins

o   Background about Don Collins, the coroner of Scottsburg

o   The author gives an account of Collins digging the grave for the solider who is to be buried the next day

  • Guards from Fort Knox practice their nine-gun salute for the officer that it is going to be buried

o   There is an account of most of the guards, accompanied by their names

o   The author goes into detail as to what they do before the funeral starts

  • The older Collins drives the funeral hearse to the grave site

o   Those who know the family, those in the military, and civilian motorcyclists surround the grave site

  • The soldiers from Fort Knox lower the casket into the burial vault

o   The author then goes on to name the vault company and describe it

  • The reverend speaks, bagpipers play, and three songs are played over the loudspeaker – including “Hurt” by Nine Inch Nails
  • Seven of the soldiers fire three volleys

o   It sounds like a single sound

o   News cameras are on them

  • Leatherbee is a genuine bugler

o   He plays “Taps” and the author describes different variations of the song

o   He doesn’t close his eyes so emotion is conveyed

  • After “Taps” the flag is folded by the men who lowered the casket

o   The author describes the folding of the flag and the emotions of the men folding it – their hands are shaking

  • Once the flag passes inspection it’s given to an older women, who is assumed to be the soldiers mother

o   The general is standing next to her

  • The general has seen too many funerals
  • The general comments on the mannerisms of the soldier’s wife, Missie, at the funeral
  • The author describes the myth of the flag folding
  • The funeral ends

o   The general and guards fly back

o   Everyone leaves

o   The Collins’ start to fill in the grave

  • The section ends with the sergeant’s name and his birth and death year

Pt 2

  • This part of the story focus’s on the soldier’s mother

o   She recounts his baptism and happy times she had with him in this church

o   The mother smokes today for the first time in a long time

o   She recounts how her brother and first husband died

  • Her other children came home for the funeral

o   The soldier’s older brother who is also in the army and his sister

o   Her brother and sister also come to attend their nephew’s funeral

  • People in the town come to the funeral as well

o   Some because it was the mayor’s nephew and others because they knew the mother

  • The author observes the faces of the people sitting in the church

o   Their love for the solider radiates off of them

Pt 3

  • The soldier has been laying in the Collins funeral for sometime until his funeral

o   He was escorted from the airport by a pair of brothers

o   The brothers were greeted by hundreds of people with flags

  • This was the longest and biggest procession the guards had ever seen

o   The author then explains what the Patriot Guard is and why it formed

  • The soldier was pulled by a hearse driven by the older Collins and his mother followed behind with her brother
  • The aunt remarks the patriotism of the people they passed
  • The author tells an anecdote about where the soldier used to work
  • At the end of the procession was the soldier’s best friend

o   They were outcasts in school

o   The soldier was supposed to be in his wedding

o   They rode skateboards together

o   He set up the soldier with his wife, Missie

  • The friend liked to paint

o   He designed the soldier’s tombstone

  • Flags lined the interstate and truck radios chimed in to welcome him home
  • The soldier took a while to complete high school, hit a rough patch, and was kicked out of the house at one point

o   He went to live with his sister in Florida

o   Leaving brought him back home and he turned his life around

  • The soldier had a family and got a job

o   The job wasn’t cutting it and he decided to follow in his older brother’s footsteps and join the army

  • Army life suited him

o   He started in Alaska

  • The last time the mother saw her son was Christmas 2006

o   She drove him to the airport in Louisville

  • Now the soldier was coming home with a full procession filled with people who had known him his whole life

o   The soldier was dressed in his finery in the casket

o   He was whole enough for open viewing

  • The family had a hard time seeing him and believing it was him because he was gone so long

o   His brother put his Mason ring on his brother, with his hands shaking as he did so

Pt 4

  • The army Chaplin needed a quiet place before the service

o   He came with the guard

o   The author explains the color-coding system of soldiers and how they die

  • The Chaplin’s calling came to him in Bosnia

o   Today hit home because he had a family

  • When the hearse arrived he debriefed the family on what they would see

o   The wood caskets are heavier than metal but all soldiers are dressed the same underneath

o   The weight of caskets gives some indication of how the person died

  • People were looking for distractions as to not look at the casket
  • The Chaplin looked at the solder’s family and thought of his

o   He finished the reading with the 46th psalm

  • The wife folded her arms over the flag and wept

o   The mother held onto her grandchildren

o   The Chaplin cried as well

  • The guards carried the casket back to the hearse
  • The brothers who escorted the soldier from the airport led the procession

o   Two guards in the back of the van would soon find themselves in Iraq

Official Pt 2: Dover Air force Base

  • The Pentagon called Greene

o   His business had been in the auto industry

  • Until 2005 soldiers had been sent home on commercial planes

o   That changed when a family started a campaign as to how the military would be flown home and met

  • High profile planes were needed to transport mutilated bodies home
  • Greene’s company designed spaces for caskets in planes

o   The pilots were low-profile – one of the pilots said you just have to fly

o   There are some states that had more casualties than others while some have had none

  • This soldier’s flight home was their first to Indiana
  • They’ve noticed that small towns have the highest turnouts

o   Sometimes parents don’t show and sometimes the honor guard doesn’t either

  • When they landed in Indiana someone from the National Guard makes sure the body matches the name and hasn’t been damaged during the flight

o   The family meets the casket in the hanger

o   Sometimes the pilots go back in the plane because they cant handle the family’s reactions

  • Some soldiers stick out more in their minds than others

Pt. 3

  • Larsen entered the Port Mortuary in the Air Force in Delaware
  • There’s only a 12 person permanent staff there
  • It’s the worlds largest mortuary
  • It has records of every man and woman KIA to date
  • The soldier spent five days there before returning home

o   His body was scanned for bombs

  • The soldier was cleaned, his body parts tagged and cataloged, and placed back into the body bag to head home

o   There were no personal effects found on his body

o   Two rooms in the building deal with their personal effects

  • Chaplains are there every day
  • The soldiers can only be truly identified once they arrive

o   Then there’s an autopsy

o   The soldier suffered traumatic injuries consistent with explosives – his remains were incomplete

o   Wounds are documented and recorded in the database

o   Body fluids are replaced in order to keep from decaying

  • The body is put together best for “view ability”

o   Soldiers help their comrades look this way

o   It’s an intimate, hands on process

  • The solders are dressed in their best and the family chooses a wood or metal casket
  • Sometimes when prepping the bodies extra steps are taken to show care – i.e. shining buttons
  • The flags are last

o   They are creaseless and longer than a standard one

Pt. 4

  • The Major General must attend every funeral of a soldier KIA and greet every plane landing on Dover
  • The soldiers have a long way home before they make it back to the states
  • Honor guards from every major military branch greet the planes with lists of the dead
  • They roll out a red carpet for those returning home

o   Sometimes it’s one case, sometimes its more

o   Each case is moved one at a time and given a three second salute

  • Sometimes people are rendered speechless

o   A prayer is said for those lost

  • It doesn’t matter which branch carries who

Official Pt. 3

  • A staff sergeant looks at the body of his friend at his feet in the helicopter
  • The author describes the sergeant and tells how the two met
  • A medivac was called for the soldier but he was deemed KIA
  • The staff sergeant knew it was the soldier based off the radio code

o   He took off the headphones because he didn’t want to hear the rest

o   Helicopters landed and brought the soldier toward the truck

  • The soldier was looked at for distinguishing features

o   The solider would be on his way to Kuwait 6 hours later

Pt. 4

  • The soldier’s older brother visited him the week before his death

o   They took pictures together

o   He lost of his mother’s reaction

o   He called his unlace at home first

  • The brother then made sure his aunt with was his mother
  • Candidate wives gather round to see if they become widows
  • They knew something was wrong

o   The wife sent her kids next door to play

  • The aunt was with the mother when she opened the door to the soldiers
  • Once the mother found out the news spread through the town quickly
  • The wife found out and dropped the phone
  • Bags were packed and people from times of the past gathered together again

Pt. 5

  • The author describes what happened to the soldier when he died
  • He also described the man driving the truck and the other men in the vehicle
  • The soldier had just talked to his family

o   He heard an explosion while talking to them

  • The author describes how the army named areas of Bhagdad

Potential Records

Personal story

  • none

All of the hard data (career games played, PER, college statistics, past NBA draft results) I need for my story is publicly available, via NBA.com/stats and  basketball-reference.com. The pool of players I’m looking at is pretty big: players drafted from 2003 – 2011 (they have >5 years worth of NBA Data to look at; avg. NBA career is 4.8 years).

Team story:

  • current team rosters (e.g , Grayson)
  • Transfer migration patterns in GA high schools

High school records can be hard to track, but we’ve  already started compiling a list of local HS football transfer transfers to contact. We may need to file open records request to know the amount of transfers (within GHSA) over the last few years;  some patterns may emerge once we parse the data (like if there’s an area or school most transfers are leaving)

On Jenkins, NCAA

The gist: A group of college student athletes filed an antitrust suit against the NCAA to challenge the limits placed on athletics aid.

The players:  Former Clemson football player Martin Jenkins and two current Wisconsin athletes: basketball player Nigel Hayes and football player Alec James (and they’re  reppin’ football and men’s basketball players in the power conferences). The group scooped antitrust/labor lawyer Jeffrey Kessler — the same dude representing the NFLPA and NBPA in his spare time — to handle the case.

The quirk:  Jenkins & Friends are not arguing that student-athletes should  receive athletics aid up to the full cost of attendance. They claim they’re entitled to a paycheck and  the athletics scholarship model is a price fixing restraint on athlete compensation.

TL;DR*:  Jenkins seeks to end all financial restrictions on college athletes.

Losing Jenkins could mean that the NCAA could no longer enforce scholarship limits or the amount schools could pay for scholarships. It would be an open market, and the finances could change considerably.

Story Ideas:

  • How could the NCAA set up a ‘lockbox’ with funds for student-athlete to receive after they’ve graduated, or gotten drafted to the NFL?
    • Would such a lock box also apply to other sports besides football, even if they don’t receive TV attention?
  • If players were payed, would there be a fraction allocated to tuition to help fund the athletics department?
  • Only a slim percentage of college athletes actually are ‘worth’ a full scholarship — would there a pay grade and ‘cap’ set on the amount student athletes could receive?

 

*too long; didn't read

Open Records

The new open records law just speaks to the general paranoia in the SEC. The problem is, this is bigger than just football. It’s a detriment to the student and professional journalist who want to serve the public.

If an athletic program can push to delay it’s response time to records request, why wouldn’t other state agencies follow suit? The lawmakers wrote the new open record pretty broadly. the new law puts a delay on releasing new contract terms, any NCAA complaint letters, or if there are any new projects that come from taxpayer money.

Changing operating procedures won’t even give Smart an advantage on the field or in recruiting. The football department has access to doghouses full of money, near-professional facilities, and is in arguably the best state for high school football talent. Restricting access to public documents won’t help UGA win a national title. It won’t keep its wide receivers from dropping passes. But it does hurt taxpayers in Georgia, fans and anybody who cares about UGA — and any other athletic department in the state.

LeBron James — the unanimous 2016 Finals MVP

LeBron James was unanimously named MVP of the NBA Finals for the third time following the Cleveland Cavaliers win over the Golden State Warriors this June. Here’s why:

2016 NBA Finals Stats

Over the seven-game series, James averaged 29.7 points, 11.3 rebounds and 8.9 assists with an effective field goal percentage of 53.3. He also led all players in all 5 major statistical categories, the first player to do so in NBA history. He became the third player to record a triple-double in Game 7 of the Finals, joining Jerry West in 1969 and James Worthy in 1988.

James is now 4-2 all time in Game 7s and 2-0 when the ultimate game comes in the NBA Finals.

Personal Story // Memo

I’m looking at how age/college experience of NBA Draft picks correlates to NBA success. The independent variable (primary predictor) I’m keying in on is the amount of college games played, in 5 Tiers:  <10 , 10-33 , 31 – 60,  61-90 , 91-120+.The dependent variable will be # of NBA games played.

Graphics

  • Im think of plotting the player points  in a 4 quadrant graph to plot the points data. My pool of players would be players selected in the last 20 years (that may be ambitious), with color coordinating for lottery (1-15), first round, and second round picks.

Key questions:

  • What are some other determinants for NBA success?
    • PER, career Prass (Points+Rebound+assists) average
    • major award winners
      • MVP/ROY
      • All-NBA team appearances
  • Why hasn’t the Brandon Jennings theory caught on?
    • Some blue chip HS players like Brandon Jennings, Jeremy Tyler chose to forego college and play overseas for a year before coming to the NBA. Tyler is out the league, and Brandon Jennings is a sixth man for the New York Knicks (his 4th team in 7 years)

Sources:

  • Agents
  • Players (going to Hawks media day Monday)
  • Coaches //and scouts if available
  • NBA media members (Woj, Zach Lowe)

 

LeBron : Prime Efficiency Infographic

(Not sure if the title reads as “this an infographic about LeBron’s efficiency in his prime” or “this the most efficient infographic you will ever see on LeBron” but it  works.)

 

How did LeBron James transform himself into the 35-points-on-14-shots beast and help the Miami Heat win two titles? Kirk Goldsberry tells the story masterfully, using his trademark shooting hexmaps. The maps themselves are efficient; fitting as they show how LeBron has gotten better even as his athleticism slip away.

 

To me, this graphic satisfies all of Tufte’s tenants and the basic principles of design. It shows LeBron’s evolution in a blatant and easily understandable manner , without any filler. The numbers literally talk to you — there a quotes bubbles that explain what each significant stat means — and the font has a comic-sans touch that make it feel easier to read.

 

Goldsberry names his sources, one first reference, and leaves links for readers to go on do their research. Or fact check him. Either way, he’s still holding himself accountable for all the info in the graphic and the article.

 

Although colorful, the graphics are not decoration for the article. They help expand our perception. Reading the numbers on a table may do LeBron justice, but Goldsberry’s maps give you a different scope on the data. . . like a good infographic is supposed to.